i like this sketch a lot, nice job you might want to use whatever program you're using to go in and erase the old pencil smudges, they make it really grainy. once they're gone, you can go in and shade with the painter. i like her face a lot though

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hehe thanks, I like this one a lot too turned out ok I think, I woulda erased all the smudges already but imworried messing up the look... I'll get to it eventually.

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Listen, strange women lyin' in ponds distributin' swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme excutive power derives from a mandate from the masses not some farcical aquatic ceremony

AND SO, YET AGAIN! I SAY... I HATE U AND YOUR AWSOME ABILTY TO COLOR IN PICS... but other then the fact that I totally wish I could suck u clean of talent and us it for my own pics. DUDE IT LOOKS GREAT!!!! love the water effects.

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Its mist...

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Listen, strange women lyin' in ponds distributin' swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme excutive power derives from a mandate from the masses not some farcical aquatic ceremony

um.. yea.. that's what I ment to say.. he he he. -.-crap

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Nothing better then a good cup of coffee

Ooh, that's really good. Did you draw this, or just colour it?

Assuming that you just coloured, I'll comment on that. (If not, please kindly correct me.) Nice job, the colours are all very smooth, especially the background. I've always been pretty crappy with that type of thing, but the trees and such are excellent. And the leaves... did you use a preset brush for those? xD

As for the mist, to make it a little less water-like and more mist-like, you might want to try playing with the opacity so you could lightly see her legs through it. If you didn't draw that part, it would be kind of hard, however. But good job nonetheless.

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Yea I drew it all, bit of Lineage 2 fan art.

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Listen, strange women lyin' in ponds distributin' swords is no basis for a system of government. Supreme excutive power derives from a mandate from the masses not some farcical aquatic ceremony

Ohhh! Mist! I thought she was without legs. I really see the whole idea here now. You really did a very lovely job

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I would suggest using a great deal more shading. Don't be afraid, contrast it your friend! Also, try and separate the hair more into individual peices that move independently of each other. I like the colors. ^ ^